SSS: April 29 #sixsunday

28 Apr

Welcome back for another Sunday, Sixers!  Today’s post is another short installment from my WIP, Semester of Thursdays.  This snippet reveals Meredith Westbrook dealing with an overly amorous suitor on her first Thursday night out with her best friend, Lena Whyte.

 “What’s wrong with your friend?” Billy asked Lena, his voice loud enough to carry over the crackling bass.

“She’s sober,” Lena said sadly, as if that single fact should have explained the world’s mysteries.

“And I’m not interested in you,” I said, praying the blunt words would penetrate his thick skull.

“I just want you to know that you’re the first girl to ever turn me down,” he shot back.

I inspected Billy from his brillo-pad hair to his too-tight t-shirt holding him in like a cheap, cotton corset.  “I highly doubt that.”

I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my six!  If you’re interested in participating, check out Six Sunday, sign up, and choose six sentences to post next Sunday!

Here are a few of my favorites from today’s SSS: Siobhan Muir (a Vamp Six); Layna Pimentel (a Historical Six); Kelly Seguin (an Intriguing Six); Melissa Mackinnon (a Waiting Six); Patricia Ann Preston (a Yard Sale Six); Angela Quarles (a Tense Six); Donna Cummings (a Great Six); Alisha Robinson (a Frustrated Six)

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32 Responses to “SSS: April 29 #sixsunday”

  1. Wildcat's Wife April 28, 2012 at 11:31 pm #

    Brillo-pad hair made me LOL. Good dialogue. And, funny! Nice six!

    • movingforeword April 29, 2012 at 8:49 am #

      Having you say it’s funny is quite the compliment! Thank you :)

  2. Alix Cameron April 29, 2012 at 1:19 am #

    Great dialogue, I felt like I was eavesdropping.

  3. Layna April 29, 2012 at 9:16 am #

    Smashing dialogue! Love the snarkiness that emanates from it.

    • movingforeword April 29, 2012 at 9:37 am #

      Thank you! Snarkiness is the character’s middle name!

  4. Patricia Preston April 29, 2012 at 9:33 am #

    I love this! Hope you get it finished.

    • movingforeword April 29, 2012 at 9:37 am #

      Me too, Patricia! Thankfully, it’s coming along swimmingly.

  5. Angela Quarles April 29, 2012 at 9:57 am #

    Ouch, she doesn’t mince words does she! Great 6, and thanks for the shoutout!

  6. Tc Archer April 29, 2012 at 10:41 am #

    ROFL. Love it.

  7. A.S. Fenichel April 29, 2012 at 11:48 am #

    Wow, she’s a little mean. I love it!

    • movingforeword April 29, 2012 at 3:10 pm #

      I prefer the term “brutally honest.” Don’t worry, he deserved it!

  8. Melissa MacKinnon April 29, 2012 at 12:02 pm #

    I love your description in the last line – I really LOL’ed at that one!! And thank you so much for including me in your faves for today – I’m honored!!!

    • movingforeword April 30, 2012 at 7:44 am #

      Thank you, Melissa! Your six def. deserved a mention. I appreciate you stopping by!

  9. Paula Martin April 29, 2012 at 12:31 pm #

    Great dialogue, she certainly put him in his place!

  10. Ursula Grey April 29, 2012 at 3:16 pm #

    Great six! Loved your description of him:-)

    • movingforeword April 29, 2012 at 3:35 pm #

      Thanks so much, Ursula. I’m thrilled I stumbled upon this exercise via your page :)

  11. Monica Enderle Pierce April 29, 2012 at 5:09 pm #

    Bwah-ha-ha! So much to love about this. Meredith is a pistol, all right.

  12. Jennifer Lowery April 29, 2012 at 5:36 pm #

    Brillo pad hair is awesome! Great six!

  13. Lorraine Paton April 29, 2012 at 7:49 pm #

    LOL! Love her reply!

  14. Donna Cummings April 29, 2012 at 8:29 pm #

    It’s always a treat to read your snippets each week. :) I LOVE these women. I want to be their BFF. LOL And thanks for mentioning my six — I appreciate that!

    • movingforeword April 30, 2012 at 7:43 am #

      I’m honored that you continue to enjoy my six, Donna!

  15. siobhanmuir April 29, 2012 at 10:45 pm #

    I loved this line “I inspected Billy from his brillo-pad hair to his too-tight t-shirt holding him in like a cheap, cotton corset.” LOL That’s awesome! Great six, Jenny. :)

    • movingforeword April 30, 2012 at 7:39 am #

      Thanks so much! This whole scene is derived from a personal experience, so it was pretty easy to write :)

  16. Alisha Robinson April 29, 2012 at 11:11 pm #

    What a great six! I loved the description :) And thank you for adding me as one of your favs … total honour!

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